Vir Norin

So are you going to finish her or does our critique has killed all your ambitions? If you want I can help you with anatomy. But I will need some colorless shots of the model to judge the structure better.

Oh man, don't you see the model is so wrong and even creepy? I remember her from your previous thread and when I saw the name of the new one I was expecting to see a serious work on mistakes and not just re-rendering. Before doing stuff like hair, clothing and especially shaders you must concentrate on the actual geometry. Cause the anatomy is wrong and she looks lumpy and disproportional. Creating a smiling face is one of the trickiest task in portraiture and before jumping straight to it I seriously recommend learning stuff behind the skin (The Artist;s Complete Guide to Facial Expression by Gary Faigin is the best choice). The hair also looks odd as if her cranium was squarish and artificial. Add more stray hairs and comb them better way. As for the skin color - she receives most of the illumination from HDR image and in conjunction with quite grayish skin texture this makes her look almost dead or like a zombie. Sorry if my words sound rough but I say what I see. I cannot resist, especially when other people say it is fine when it is obviously not (i'm referring to your previous thread).